Barrie Karp:I think you have proven to be
delightfully precise in this thread, thank you, Jansy. I
look forward to more fun of your analyses of rhetorical nuances in
VN (you wrote:
(every sample demands a different rethorical
nook).)
Jansy Mello: Thank you for you encouraging
response. I'm sure there will be collaborators to provide corrections
or enlightenment while I stumble on.
VN's agility is thrilling and many finds come to me as a belated
surprise (like the one in which the outside world leaps towards Dreyer like
a dog, and he pats it affectionately - the outside world has been turned into
Tom, the dog that readers shall only meet in a future chapter
!
Personalization takes place when bodily actions and emotions
are transposed onto inanimate objects by literary devices, or
(perhaps?) in the description of how one living body-part
influences or reflects another passive part of the body ( the tongue
essaying three steps down the palate during speech in "Lolita" or "The
Enchanter's" "fidgety thoughts" and "tiptoeing words"(E p.24 and 43).
However, when we reach descriptions in which there is a passage from a
character's dancing and locomotive acts into thoughts and metaphors,* as it
happens with Van's maniambulations in ADA, the
mind-body-word focus changes, as it also occurs when the
character's fantasy system acts over the objective functions
of his autonomous brain and its sexual response for, in this
case, it's the illusion of solipsism that which seems
to be paramount in Nabokov (there's a kind of "mental
practice" that is expected by some of the
characters to have no effect on the external world, nor
does it deserve a special verbal treatment) ** But what
about the terrified "little
Gulliver"(who has, as one author expanded into a book, "a mind
of his own"), a "toy with the familiar but never
tedious trick" (E p.72) although this time his "owner's" imagination has been "left hanging
on barbed wire." (E55)? And... what's in a ."suspicious car" ( E79)?
A subjectively experienced body, acting over - or being
acted by, the same body now transformed into a
thing, is something altogether different from the instances
in which a character applies to "the toilet door
such a slam that the crystalware in the dining room react with fright ...amid
the panic-stricken chairs" (E 64), the "sponge
shedding its tears...while decorum and morality,
aware neither of the goings-on nor of the address, would remain from
visiting" (E.73), or "the blank face of his
wristwatch" (E75).and "the forest that kept
approaching in undulating hops from hillside to hillside until it slied
down an incline and tripped over the road, where it was counted and stored
away" (E 79)
See, Barry, I get easily lost...(but recovering special VN sentences
and sharing them with others is still quite delectable
...)
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* S.E Sweeney (2012) elaborates over how "Nabokov’s novels often dwell
on this contrast between mentally practicing and physically executing an
action."Cf. "Backwards, Upwards, Contrariwise, Downside Up:-
Thinking in Different Directions in Nabokov"
** "Lolita"
(with a ballooning skirt!) and excerpts from the davenport scene:
"My heart beat like a drum as she sat down, cool skirt ballooning,
subsiding, on the sofa next to me, and played with her glossy
fruit...and her bare knees rubbed and
knocked impatiently against each other..Then, with perfect simplicity, the impudent child extended her
legs across my lap...By this time I was in a state of
excitement bordering on insanity; but I also had the cunning of the insane.
Sitting there, on the sofa, I managed to attune, by a series of stealthy
movements, my masked lust to her guileless limbs. It was no easy matter to
divert the little maiden's attention while I performed the obscure adjustments
necessary for the success of the trick..and all the while keeping a
maniac's inner eye on my distant golden goal, I cautiously increased the magic
friction that was doing away, in an illusional, if not factual, sense, with the
physically irremovable, but psychologically very friable texture of the material
divide (pajamas and robe) between the weight of two sunburnt legs, resting
athwart my lap, and the hidden tumor of an unspeakable passion...every movement she made, every shuffle and ripple, helped me to
conceal and to improve the secret system of tactile correspondence between beast
and beauty — between my gagged, bursting beast and the beauty of her dimpled
body in its innocent cotton frock...I felt I could slow down in
order to prolong the glow. Lolita had been safely solipsized. The implied sun
pulsated in the supplied poplars; we were fantastically and divinely alone; I
watched her, rosy, gold-dusted, beyond the veil of my controlled delight,
unaware of it, alien to it, and the sun was on her lips, and her lips were
apparently still forming the words of the Carmen-barmen ditty that no longer
reached my consciousness...There she stood and blinked, cheeks aflame, hair
awry, her eyes passing over me as lightly as they did over the furniture...
Blessed be the Lord, she had noticed nothing!"
When Humbert Humbert's fantasies provoke a sexual
reaction that brings into play the erotic link between
a mental practice and a private physical "action"
(actually, reaction), it remains very doubtful that his victim
will perceive nothing unusual in her circumstances ("she has noticed
nothing" is his conclusion,l inspite of his description of Lolita's
innocent physical response).HH'ss silent mental exertions reach out onto
the world to become actions even before he decides to write his memoirs
using metaphors, personalizations and objectifications -
which now pass to another realm, that is, to literature In
"The Enchanter" the protagonist initially denies any intention to
touch his little russet, save in imagination. Like HH, he approaches
the shadows of her body as she moves, to caress her in thought, only.
However, he senses that something monstrous is
actually taking place and that he is corrupting her (at
least, during his early confessional mood). Besides, this psychic
force is powerful enough to drive an indignant lady away from the train
cabin she is sharing with him while he is day-dreaming about
his nymphet, although there's nothing palpable to justify the
lady's discomfiture and shame. It seems that even on a
strictly mental level (or should we include rolling eyes and panting?) a
character's literary fantasy life has an effect on the
world ( that's obvious.