If you try to get in that position, you will see that it's more likely that his hands are holding his head, or rather, to make more sense of it, that his head is in his hands. This way, my elbows did stick up, whereas with "hands clasped below resting head" -- in that position the elbows don't stick up as much. Why not just say it? Because VN likes unexpected visual images, and wants readers to think this through. The elbows are a visual detail, a kind of punctum. And yes, the text brings elbows seen sticking up in the air ("elbows raised") into a picture we haven't realized, as the unconscious might do also.
Barrie Karp
In a message dated 02/05/2008 11:15:29 GMT Standard Time, barriekarp@GMAIL.COM writes:"Across the narrow yard where the rain tinkled in the dark against some battered ash cans, windows were blandly alight and in one of the a black-trousered man with his bare elbows raised could be seen lying supine on an untidy bed."I have wondered about this, too. Could he have his hands clasped below his resting head? But then why not say so?Anthony StadlenSearch the Nabokv-L archive with Google
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