CHW offered us a list of poets VN respected ( among them Keats and
Browning). In the first part of Lolita VN made a passing mention to Hopkins and
often I hear of "dappled" clearings which might be related to
this bespeckled alliterative rhythmic poet.
And yet, in ADA, his comment on "sprung rhythm" seemed rather mocking, but
I found it difficult to judge since I cannot even imagine how Russian verse
would sound in SR. Could you, CHW, or one among our List experts
clarify ?
ADA: Mlle E...could not be relied on to take over from lagging Ada with
a breezy account of her work on a new novella of her composition (her famous
Diamond Necklace was in the last polishing stage) or with memories of Van’s
early boyhood such as those eminently acceptable ones concerning his beloved
Russian tutor, who gently courted Mlle L., wrote ‘decadent’ Russian
verse in sprung rhythm, and drank, in Russian solitude.
Also in Pale Fire, while commenting on Goethe's poem (lines 653-664),
Kinbote observes that:"one cannot sufficiently admire the ingenious way in
which
Shade manages to transfer something of the broken rhythm of the ballad
(a trisyllabic meter at heart) into his iambic verse". He
then uses a punctuation that is vaguely suggestive of
distorted Hopkins stresses ( & I hope I've been also vague
enough to signal my ignorance on the
subject)
662 Who rídes so láte in the níght and the wínd
663 . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
664 . . . . Ít is the fáther wíth
his chíld
Goethe's two lines opening the poem come out most exactly
and beautifully,
with the bonus of an unexpected rhyme (also in French:
vent-enfant), in my
own language:
Ret wóren ok spóz on nátt ut
vétt?
Éto est vótchez ut míd ik détt.
How do you think did GMHopkins rate with VN?
Jansy
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CHW:" By consulting the index to Brian Boyd’s
indispensable VN, The American Years
I was relieved to discover that Keats was that rarity, a poet and critic of
poetry who had enjoyed
what seems like VN’s unqualified affection. There are four index
references to Keats, four to Coleridge, two to Wordsworth, fifteen to
Shakespeare in general, plus 20
comments on specific
plays."